She awoke with a start not recognizing where she
was. A fire danced in the massive stone fireplace, but beyond the firelight, it
was dark. Pain shot through her hands and feet. It was expected with frostbite,
but she didn’t know just how painful it was until now.
The cabin looked to be well built out of hand hewed
logs and no wind came through the walls. It was tiny, but it probably suited
the man who rescued her. Sitting up she waited for her eyes to adjust to the
semi darkness. There was a big pile of furs in one corner. A table with two
chairs and a makeshift kitchen area. Wooden crates hung on the walls to serve
as shelves and a roughly put together plank of wood with logs for legs, held a
few kitchen items and tools.
Above the pile of furs were pegs on which a few
items of clothing hung. There was nothing fancy and nothing of convenience but
it was warm. She was grateful to have shelter from the cold. The pain in her
fingers was the worst and she dreaded looking at them. Slowly she pulled them
out from under the covers and to her relief; they weren’t blackened with severe
frostbite.
The door opened and the big man came in, a bundle of
firewood in his arms. Kicking the door closed behind him, he then glanced in
her direction. “So, you’ve decided to come back to this world did ya?”
“H- how long was I a-asleep?” she stuttered. Her
body tensed, not sure what he had in store for her.
He laid the wood next to the fireplace and threw a
log on top of the fire. The flame blazed higher. “Only a day. You sure were
hard to thaw and I’m glad ya was out when I tended your hands and feet. Painful
business it is.”
“Thank you. They are still hurting. It was nice of
you to tend to me. I was afraid I’d lose them. Actually, I figured I was going
to die out there. I’ve never seen snow so early. I wonder how the others fared.”
His dark brow rose. “Others? You said you were
alone. Damn, I live up here to be away from folks not to go rescue them.” He
took off his fur coat and sat down.
“I am or was alone. I got kicked off the wagon train
and left to fend for myself.” Her voice contained the bitterness she couldn’t
hide.
“What in tar-nation are you talking about? You must
have done something pretty awful to be banned from the wagon train.”
“Of course.”
His dark eyes widened and he ran his hand through
his thick black hair. It hung past his shoulders and she wondered when he’d it
cut last. “You might as well tell me. I’m not the type to judge.”
“My parents died and they refused to let me travel
with them alone. It was either marry old toothless Thomas or thrown off. To my
surprise they were serious and when I refused to marry Thomas they filled a
sack with a meager amount of food, filled a canteen, and allowed me to take my
coat and scarf with me.” She paused as all the pain came rushing back. There
hadn’t even been time to mourn the passing of her dear mother and father.
“Miss, that’s—”
“It’s Samantha. Samantha Foley.”
He nodded. “I’m Patrick McCrory. I have to say that’s quite the yarn you’re
spinning.”
She glanced away from his intense brown eyes. “I
wish it was just a story.”
“Well now, are you sure you weren’t inviting the
married men to look your way?”
A loud sigh was her reply. She’d thought the people
on the wagon train were crazy, but now a stranger believed her capable of
luring men. What was it about her that people assumed such an awful thing? “I
thought you said no judgment.”
“Aye, I did. How long ago did they put you out?”
“I’d say two weeks or so. I tried to follow by foot
but they actually threw rocks at me to keep me away. As far as I’m concerned,
they left me to die.” A tear rolled down her face. “Ouch!” She tried to wipe it
away.
“Don’t cry. I hate crying. If you want me to believe
your story I will.”
Her eyes narrowed. “Just what is it about me that
screams whore to you?”
“You have pretty blonde hair, and a man could get
lost in those big blue eyes of yours. I have to say you are nicely rounded in
the right places. You don’t seem very meek either.”
“You think I should have married Thomas? He is shiftless
and wanted me to be his worker, not a wife. It would have caused trouble since
I had no inclination to lay with him. He surely would have beaten me for it
too. So, maybe my predicament is my fault, I suppose I chose death over a life
of sheer hell.”
His face softened a bit but she could see the clouds
of doubt in his eyes. “I bet you’re hungry. I’ll throw something together.”
There was an edge to his voice and it didn’t invite any more conversation.
Lying back down, she figured she might as well try
to regain her strength before she was put out again.
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Love the tension between them. Although we want him to believe her, she will have to show him the kind of person she really is. Thank goodness he came along to help her, and I'd be bitter about those wagon train people for a long while. I wouldn't wish them to be out in the snow all frozen, but maybe that's their punishment for being so cruel.
ReplyDeleteGreat post ... I like the description followed by the dialogue, leaving us hanging who to trust and what to believe. Well done.
ReplyDeleteSo much emotion! And I love the description of the cabin, I felt like I was right there. This is a terrific story.
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ReplyDeleteGetting hooked on this story.Looking forward to seeing what happens with these two
ReplyDeleteOh my...what a story. I'm hooked and can't wait to see how it plays out. Methinks they might both enjoy being away from mankind.
ReplyDeleteBoy gosh what a story!
ReplyDeleteglad you're back and WOW what a post. Great layering. Love it!!
ReplyDeleteGREAT post! I feel like I'm sitting in the cabin with them. Good dialog, character development and storyline. You own this genre!
ReplyDeleteLove the fact she talks back even if she's in an uncomfortable situation.
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