Welcome- I've started a new story- The Mountain Man Romance has been submitted for publication- It finally has a title Love So Deep. This is a brand new book I'm writing. It's a historical Mail Order Bride Romance and I'm hoping to make it a series. The word for this week is "Speak". Thank you for Stopping by.
Shannon McMurphy jolted
awake as the stagecoach came to an abrupt stop.
“This is it,
Asherville, Texas,” The brown-toothed man sitting across from her announced. He
spit once again on the stagecoach floor and leered at her. “Are ya sure ya want
to get hitched to Ole John Hardy? I can be your husband if ya like.” His fetid
breath nauseated her. She wished he wouldn’t speak.
Shannon shuddered,
trying not to glance at him. He’d been undressing her with his eyes the whole
last leg of her trip. Until then there had been other passengers and he behaved
himself, but now she never wanted to be in his company again. Opening the shade,
she looked out the coach window. The sun was bright and her eyes squinted until
they became used to the light.
It didn’t look to be
much of a town but beggars couldn’t be choosers and in this situation, she was definitely
the beggar
.
The driver opened the
door, and Shannon expected to get off first but the nasty passenger pushed past
her and left. Maybe this is what manners were in the West.
The driver extended his
hand, she took it and carefully stepped out of the stagecoach. Taking a deep
breath, she let go of his hand and glanced around. Where was Mr. Hardy? He
promised to meet the stage but there was no one on the wooden sidewalk but her.
He was probably delayed at his ranch. Being a successful rancher must be hard
work.
The driver put her bag
down next to her and she smiled her thanks. “You wouldn’t know-”
“I usually drive
straight through Asherville. Never had time to meet the folks.” He stroked his
black mustache and shrugged. “Someone will be by to pick you up. A man would
have to be crazy to leave a pretty gal like you stranded.” He climbed back on
the coach, grabbed the reins and yelled. “Haw!”
Not one to stand around
waiting for something to happen, she grabbed her bag and walked down the
boardwalk. There wasn’t much in the town to recommend itself. The biggest
building was the saloon followed by the mercantile. On the other side of the
street was a place called Eats and next to that was a barbershop. Somehow,
through Mr. Hardy’s letters she was led to believe that the town was booming
and growing but that wasn’t the case.
She walked to the
mercantile hoping they’d know where her intended could be. If nothing else, it
would get her out of the blazing sun. She stopped before entering and slid her
hands down her skirt trying in vain to remove some of the dust and wrinkles but
all she created was a big puff of dust around her. What she wouldn’t give for a
bath but it would have to wait.
The bell above the door
rang as she entered the mercantile, and immediately everyone stopped and stared
at her. She always believed that first impressions mattered greatly but there
was no help for it now. Smiling she nodded in greeting to the other customers.
A tall, well-dressed woman
in her thirties, patted her dark hair in place, came from behind the counter
and headed right for Shannon putting forth a big gracious smile. “Welcome. You
must be new around here. I’m Edith Mathers, proprietor of this fine
establishment. Are you and your husband settling in our town?”
“It’s so nice to make you’re
acquaintance. Actually, I’m here to marry John Hardy. Perhaps you could tell me
where I may locate him?”
A hush fell over the
entire store and as she glanced around there were many with their mouths
dropped open.
“Do you think he got
tied up at his ranch? If it isn’t far perhaps I could rent a buggy to get out
there?” Her heart thumped painfully against her ribs as a shiver went up her
spine. “Is something wrong?”
Edith took her bag from
her and led her to a fine upholstered chair near the window. “Oh dear, how
should I say this?”
“Is he dead?”
Patting Shannon’s hand
Edith shook her head. “No, honey, John doesn’t own a ranch. Oh my, what did you
say your name was?”
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ReplyDeleteWhat exactly does John do??
No fair stopping there!! WAAAAAHHHH I feel a tantrum coming on. I need to know who and what this guy John Hardy really is. Great description, I could practically taste the dust.Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteLeft me hanging. I like the brown stained teeth description. Chewing tobacco is a nasty habit.I was always facinated by mail order brides who were willingly to leave the familiar to start a new life somewhere else.
ReplyDeleteooooh. Loving this. AND The end, wow!! Can't wait for more. The fetid breath description was excellent.
ReplyDeleteCan't wait to hear that your other story has been accepted!
Nooooo, you can't stop right there! Love the start of this new story.
ReplyDeleteThis is really your genre. You write so beautifully.
Trisha Faye